Comments on Life...From My Perspective: The Good Samaritan

Your comment was great and I can see now how the c...

2009-08-04T01:37:51.099-05:00

Your comment was great and I can see now how the characters actions in comparison with the actual definition of a "Good Samaritan" could clash. Perhaps the CEO was in actuality, the good samaritan for the generousity he showed Traci due to her honesty. (smile) I never even thought of that.

Again, Thank you for your critique and I hope you visit my blog again in the future.

I liked the beginning but had an issue with the en...

2009-08-03T21:07:59.896-05:00

I liked the beginning but had an issue with the end. I liked the development of Traci but there was no motivati

on to me for why the CEO would give her $50K. She wasn't a good samaritan, she was giving him back what was his. Wasn't the good samaritan someone who gave from his wealth to help a person who wasn't from his tribe?

Keep it up, it's got good bones.

Great positive story with a message. I could feel...

2009-08-03T02:26:41.858-05:00

Great positive story with a message. I could feel Traci's emotion as she realized the amount of the check. Good job.

Great positive story with a message. I could feel...

2009-08-03T02:26:18.978-05:00

Great positive story with a message. I could feel Traci's emotion as she realized the amount of the check. Good job.